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Link- https://youtu.be/ckYxWSkJFYo
What did I change?- I changed the intro the more of an interactive audience if it was that setting and I did this just because I didn’t know how many people I would selling pitch to. Also, I continued to talk about the growth after the pharmaceutical companies.
Feedback- The feedback I got was great I changed my tone from last time and decided to stand up again just because it does bring more excitement to the experience.
Hi Ariel you had a great video. This was your best so far. You were very clear in your wording and you made sure to describe every little piece of your business plan. When you changed your tone it completely switched how the viewer looks and portrays you. Since you changed the minor things you have now perfected your elevator pitch for a great pitch to a potential investor or business partner.
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